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#41 gpubking

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Posted 12 November 2004 - 03:35 AM

man... this is really bad poetry. Keep writing... you can only get better. :blink:

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Posted 12 November 2004 - 05:25 AM

man... this is really bad poetry. Keep writing... you can only get better.  :blink:

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Posted 12 November 2004 - 06:12 AM

man... this is really bad poetry. Keep writing... you can only get better.  :blink:

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Word. But they can take comfort in knowing there's always someone who's even more abysmal.

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#44 The_Bell_Jar

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Posted 12 November 2004 - 09:33 AM

I written this when I was whatching the film Girl, interrupted it has nothing to do with me but I just thought it was nice to share.

all these thoughts inside of me
why oh why can't they just let me be?
they give me these meds
insted of being able to think
I just sit here throwing up
in the kitchen sink

I feel so sick
I feel so strange
I don't feel like me anymore
I want to scream I want to run
I want to run out of the back door

I feel the room spinning
I fall to the ground
when I wake up there is no one around

Voices in my head
voices I don't know
what is happening to me
this is what I want to know.

People call me crazy but they don't know me
if only they were in my head and they would be me
they don't even care
I bet they don't even want to stare
but when I walk down the street
I see you all look at me

you don't even know me
you don't even see me
so why do I always
feel like you're
staring at me

my mind wont let me rest
I don't know what to think
all I want to say is just let me be.

this is about me though...

I may not be able to do much but in my heart I'm danceing. I may not be able to run after you but inside I'm running like the wind. I may not be able to go on rollercoasters but inside I'm screaming as if I am on one. I may not be able to ware nice clothes and have nice hair but inside I do.. I may not be able to walk as far or fastbut inside I'm running in a marethon. I may not be able to climb flights of stairs but inside I'm climbing up the tallest skyscraper I may not be able to go out when it's cold but inside i'm in the snow in the north poleI may not be able to go on holiday on a plane but inside I'm flying above the clouds I maynot have friends like you but inside I have thousands and inside I'm just like you.Inside I'm danceing inside I'm running inside i'm laughing with a lot of friends inside i'm on a rollercoaster inside i'm on a plane going anywhere I like inside I'm just like you inside we're so alike.

Edited by The_Bell_Jar, 12 November 2004 - 11:09 AM.


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Posted 12 November 2004 - 11:05 AM

Word.  But they can take comfort in knowing there's always someone who's even more abysmal.

http://omn1.deviantart.com

That guy is a laugh.

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The dude churns out about 16 poems a day. He's a literary crap machine. Someone take away his rhyming dictionary, quick!

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Posted 12 November 2004 - 01:49 PM

There's a poem I'd like to write, but I can't think of anything that rhymes with cheesebugrer.

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Posted 12 November 2004 - 02:42 PM

Bank merger

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Posted 12 November 2004 - 02:48 PM

No way man, your g is sloppy, I need one that's rigid. I gotta find a word where you smack that g around a little.

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Posted 12 November 2004 - 09:53 PM

Write the whole poem in Latin then. Everything rhymes in Latin.

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Posted 14 November 2004 - 08:42 PM

A robin is a bird that tweets
Robyn is a girl thatís sweet
With her golden locks
And the way she walks
Thatís a girl Iíd like to meet

A robin is a bird that flies
I get lost in Robynís eyes
She doesnít see me stare
She doesnít know Iím there
That girlís always on my mind

A robin is a bird that sings
She makes my heart sting
I remember what to say
but she looks away
That girl is my everything

A robin eats the worm up whole
Robyn really pains my soul
But I donít make a stir
Because I canít have her
That girl makes my heart grow cold

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Posted 14 November 2004 - 09:15 PM

Went to the barber for a shave, he tried to slit my throat
Went to the barber for a shave, he tried to slit my throat
I broke that man's soul, tell by the way he spoke
Tore down his wife, made that woman low
Tore down his wife, made that woman low
Lower than the sun in the cradle of God's throat

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Posted 14 November 2004 - 10:29 PM

I got me evil dreams, I wear my shoes to sleep
I got me evil dreams, I wear my shoes to sleep
Outrun the Devil blowing smoke out my sleeve
He's in my chest, like a whooping cough
He's in my chest, like a whooping cough
If he's in my mind too, I'll know soon enough
Handcuff the man, throw him in the tank
Drag his gal to the bars, see what she think
Says, "Keep 'em bummy" and backs off sweet
The man claws his face like a swamp floor leech
Jumps in the toilet, does a stomping jig
Sings like a mother, but can't play a lick
His mother is his father, his father his nothing
The man knows not psalm, but ol' kiln cussing

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Posted 16 November 2004 - 11:09 PM

The 50's weren't good to me
Communist scares
Chalk up Levittown to tax breaks
And long black hairs
Running down the country
On a horse of cross red
Flossed with sundry
McCarthyist bled
I practice my smile
In a mirror in my room
And when they ask me the questions
I make the girls swoon
They drop to their laurels
And sit in a row
And tell me I'm gracious
Blessed Jim Crow
Fire your bus up
Make the seats burn
They yearn to explode
Cause rubbers don't learn
Turned on like a switch
By racist back hills
Before the cinders
In front of the fills
Before stone tinder
In front of the wells
Which reach to the core
Of cultural hell
I bought a dishwasher
It cleaned up my plates
I glance at myself
Look through what I hate
Don't rightly notice
The spinning creed
Run down my nose
At jacked past speeds

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Posted 17 November 2004 - 03:41 AM

A piece of cloth.
And Mister do you think it's alright?
Do you think it's alright?
If I don't let anyone shout.
To keep someone in for 3 days.
Just to pretend that is all I want.
"Don't be a hero."
That is all that I want.
To take care.
To make sure.
And Mister, ain't they better now?
New and senseless.

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Posted 19 November 2004 - 07:28 PM

I give you...

Best Friend
Best Friend
Where have you been all my life?
I love you best friend I really do.
I can carry you in my pocket.
I can use you to help me.
Best Friend
Best Friend
Why did you leave without notice?
Even though I donít want you back again.
No
No
Best Friend
Go Best Friend
Out Best Friend
Show me how you me scars on me again.
Just for the last time now best friend.
Now Best Friend.
Iíll give you up for sure this time Best Friend.
Bye
Bye
Again
Tomorrow Iíll visit a real Friend.
Who has feelings and true meaning.
And who takes the time to make me feel better about Ö.



I wonder if anyone knows what it really is about

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Posted 19 November 2004 - 07:40 PM

Masterbation?

I hope it is.

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Posted 19 November 2004 - 07:49 PM

Back off, Michelle. It's not about masturbation.

::Takes talk show host stance:: I, think...that we all can relate to...what you are talking. About.

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Posted 19 November 2004 - 07:50 PM

My livery cab lady
Is a mile high head
And when I'm in the john
She's in my old bed

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Posted 20 November 2004 - 06:07 PM

I like to write down all the thought I have that I cant explain every once in a while.

some examples


Piano keys taste like bubblegum
Bubblegum flavored Popsicles (artificial)
When playing (oral) roman ruins
On a sunny day inside a hairdryer
Tastes like microchip children who
Howling like monkeys on a fire engine
Engin Engynos attack
“Boy’s don’t have anginas”
Matt’s wide i’d iocus-pocus
Hic est corpus meum
Aren't you at least a little pregnant by now?
With all those spittle telephones in you mouth
And in your mother’s homing pigeon
I don’t want to be so acid-free any more
I wanna bet on a cripple fight

2nd one

BAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAM!
Cookie-break, Cookie-break!
I wish I had a little blue fish
A big sinking pile of sad little fish
Already racked up by a ra-ra-ra-rake
Brazen Belts buckle themselves
Trazen trucks trukle themselves
Chazen Children Chuckle themselves
Dazing ding ding da-da-da
Water fall, Water fall
Whoosh-WHOOSHH-whoosh
Wa-WA-wha-
Tdowiththerestofyourlife

I’m a little actress
I’m a little fairy
Hiding in the ‘firm-ry
Killing a cannery

Whoo-wa-whoo-whoo
Da-di-Da
Toe-nail, Toe-nale’
A-breain’ all my bones
Thumb-tack, Thumb-take
A-stabbin’ my U-ka-lay-lee
Pin-cushion, Pin-cake
Instant alien birthday party

Enceinte… obstacle… a-ca-jou… periscope…
Won’t we ever stop for ice cream?
Da-de, Da-de, Da-de
Loooong, long a-go, loooong ago…


I'm not trying to pass this off as poetry (I know most people would say if it looks like poetry, walks like poetry and talks like poetry than it's poetry- I disagree)
There just fun to make and maybe you'll think they're interesting.

Edited by maninthecorner, 20 November 2004 - 06:10 PM.


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Posted 20 November 2004 - 06:16 PM

I like to write down all the thought I have that I cant explain every once in a while.

some examples
Piano keys taste like bubblegum
Bubblegum flavored Popsicles (artificial)
When playing (oral) roman ruins
On a sunny day inside a hairdryer
Tastes like microchip children who
Howling like monkeys on a fire engine
Engin Engynos attack
ďBoyís donít have anginasĒ
Mattís wide iíd iocus-pocus
Hic est corpus meum
Aren't you at least a little pregnant by now?
With all those spittle telephones in you mouth
And in your motherís homing pigeon
I donít want to be so acid-free any more
I wanna bet on a cripple fight

2nd one

BAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAMBAM!
Cookie-break, Cookie-break!
I wish I had a little blue fish
A big sinking pile of sad little fish
Already racked up by a ra-ra-ra-rake
Brazen Belts buckle themselves
Trazen trucks trukle themselves
Chazen Children Chuckle themselves
Dazing ding ding da-da-da
Water fall, Water fall
Whoosh-WHOOSHH-whoosh
Wa-WA-wha-
Tdowiththerestofyourlife

Iím a little actress
Iím a little fairy
Hiding in the Ďfirm-ry
Killing a cannery

Whoo-wa-whoo-whoo
Da-di-Da
Toe-nail, Toe-naleí
A-breainí all my bones
Thumb-tack, Thumb-take
A-stabbiní my U-ka-lay-lee
Pin-cushion, Pin-cake
Instant alien birthday party

EnceinteÖ obstacleÖ a-ca-jouÖ periscopeÖ
Wonít we ever stop for ice cream?
Da-de, Da-de, Da-de
Loooong, long a-go, loooong agoÖ
I'm not trying to pass this off as poetry (I know most people would say if it looks like poetry, walks like poetry and talks like poetry than it's poetry- I disagree)
There just fun to make and maybe you'll think they're interesting.

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i do that sometimes. I like those thoughts, by the way.




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